the most important aim of science should be to improve people's live. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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science

to Promote alternative aspects of life which

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always debatable ,has ,now become more controversial with many People claiming, it is beneficial

while

others reject

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foremost reason behind

this

is that in my opinion helping People through the

science

has right communication with people's

lives

.Nowadays we have many varieties of

science

in different situations like Psychology/

science

of innovation or artificial intelligence. All

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considerable effects on our

lives

,

for instance

: we can facilitate our work with technology and experience pleasure

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in our

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lives

lifes

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,

also

it impacts on the medical system,

for example

last

year my uncle suffered from cancer problem and he could improve by the Power of

science

,Another striking benefit in

this

regard is that creating many facilities with

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of

science

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has expanded my awareness in

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society even

this

issue eliminates

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of medications and

treatmants

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treatments

.Categorically discussing,it can not be ignored that the main reason behind

this

is that

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We have to consume of noval Phenomenon for earning particular opportunities.Probing ahead, one of the main underlying

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behind

this

is that, any occurrences consist of some detrimental in

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our

lives

.

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many health Problems are caused by our sedentary lifestyle that it originates from technology.

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individuals should observe limits in everything.Apart from

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mentioned above， it can be clearly stated

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why many are against

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tread . In conclusion to the arguments aforementioned above ,one can reach

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gist that the drawbacks of promoting our

lives

through

science

are indeed too great to ignore.