The table above gives information about the amount of tax collected ( as % of GDP) in five countries for 4 years between  1975 and 2005

The table above gives information about the amount of tax collected ( as % of GDP) in five countries for 4 years between  1975 and 2005
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The table compares five different
countries
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in terms of their annual
tax
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collected as a
percentage
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of
GDP
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between 1975 and 2005.
Overall
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, the data shows that all five
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experienced a gradual increase in the proportion of
tax
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collected relative to
GDP
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over the years.
Sweden
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had the highest
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of
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tax
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throughout the period, showing the most significant growth.
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, the U.S. exhibited the smallest increase in
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as a
percentage
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of
GDP
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during
this
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timeframe. Starting with the
countries
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showing the highest
tax
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proportions,
Sweden
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and the U.S. began with respective percentages of 46% and 25.1% in 1975, with
Sweden
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's figure nearly double that of the U.S. Both
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saw steady increases until 1995, reaching 51% in
Sweden
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and 27.1% in the U.S. In 2005,
Sweden
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continued to demonstrate substantial growth, reaching a peak of 70%, making it the country with the highest
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-to-
GDP
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ratio.
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, the U.S. only rose slightly to 27.4%, remaining one of the
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with the lowest proportion of
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taxed. Looking at the remaining
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—Korea, Japan, and Turkey—these three nations demonstrated similar proportions and changes in
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as a
percentage
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of
GDP
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. All three
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started the period with an average
tax
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rate
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of around 15-16% of
GDP
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. By 1985, Korea experienced the highest growth in
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tax
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among these nations, rising to 27%.
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, Japan's
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rate
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increased only slightly,
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1% to 16%,
while
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Turkey’s
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rate
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declined slightly to 15%.
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, by 2005, Japan and Turkey showed notable increases. Japan’s
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-to-
GDP
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ratio doubled to 32%,
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Turkey’s reached 27.4%. Korea, meanwhile, remained almost unchanged from its 1985
rate
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, tax, percentage, gdp, sweden, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • tax collection
  • percentage (%)
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • increase/decrease
  • economic impact
  • tax rates
  • comparative analysis
  • data interpretation
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