You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. You should write at least 150 words.

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The chart presents the number of citizens from 5 European nationalities residing in each other's countries in the year 2011. The column of the table shows the amount of people living in the different countries and the rows represent the countries where they are living .

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Germany

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has the highest number of immigrants totalling 1,198,000 million

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Poland has the lowest with only a total of 6000.

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, Poland has the highest count for emigrants reaching a total of 1,168,000 million and Spain has the least with only 202,107 thousand. In

Germany

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, most of its immigrants are from Italy

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most of its residents emigrate to Britain.

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, Polish resident's chosen country for immigration is

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Britain.

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, most of its migrants are from

Germany

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. British people's top country for immigrating is Spain

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Germany

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is more popular among Spanish citizens.

Moreover

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, residents of Italy are high in numbers in Poland and are low in

Germany

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. Britain

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has the least numbers for both nationalities.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. You should write at least 150 words.

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of thi development?

Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter • remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was • thank them for the card and gift • explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centres and only bicycles be allowed instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?