The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.  Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  Write at least 150 words.   (20 mins.)
The pie charts illustrate the social buying sales for retail sectors in
5-year
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period of time from 2005 to 2010 in Canada. Units are measured in percentage. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that food, beverage, and video games increased, but home furnishings
as well as
electronic
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and
appliance
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appliances
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decreased. In terms of food and beverage, it started the data from 22 per
cent
in the beginning to rise exactly 10 and finished the graph at 32 per
cent
which was the highest number in general.
Likewise
, video games stood at 18 per
cent
which was the lowest one in 2005 to climb gradually by a mere 5 per
cent
. As for remaining, appliance and
electronincs
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electronics
began the chart from 35 per
cent
to fall to 30 per
cent
in the final year surveyed.
Lastly
, home furnishings was at 25 per
cent
at first to decline by a precise 10 per
cent
in the end.
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