The figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The bar chart illustrates what ages in 1000
adolescents
of a survey believed criminal responsibilities
,marrige
and voting Correct your spelling
marriage
right
have Replace the word
rights
permited
Correct your spelling
permitted
to
younger in five Change preposition
apply
countries
,including the USA,the UK,Mexico
,Japan and Egypt.
Overall
,as we can observe apparently the chart,Japan
young Replace the word
Japanese
people
accept more highest age
in three rights than younger in every countries
.Change to a singular noun
country
All off
six Change preposition
In all
countries
,adolescents
in Mexico
that
Correct word choice
apply
they
think young Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
can process rights and responsibilities
under 18 years
old.
To the
begin with,in Japan,younger think to need the highest Correct article usage
apply
age
to have marriage
right
,about 22 Replace the word
rights
years
old,and voting right
Fix the agreement mistake
rights
also
has
the highest Correct subject-verb agreement
have
years
compare
Wrong verb form
compared
other
Change preposition
to other
countries
about 20 years
old.Meanwhile,the USA young people
believe that adolescents
allow 12 years
old to have criminal responsibilities
less ages than other
five Correct article usage
the other
countries
,also
USA younger have
the same thinking over Wrong verb form
has
marriage
and voting should be 18 years
old.
In addition
,the UK has second rank in marriage
age
,the figures saw adolescents
are granted to young people
in
voting and criminal Change preposition
apply
responsibilities
are both the same data in the UK and Mexico
(respectively 16 and 17 years
old).Moreover
,young people
in Mexico
and Egypt, also
have same
Correct article usage
the same
age
in marriage
right
over 16 years
old. Nonetheless
,Japanese adolescents
believe that criminal responsibilities
and Epypt young people
in
voting think the same Change preposition
apply
age
to allow,about 18 years
old.Young people
in Egypt think adolescents
commit
a crime have to abide by Correct pronoun usage
who commit
responsble
Correct your spelling
responsibility
in
14 Change preposition
at
years
old.Submitted by a0953957266 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words adolescents, responsibilities, right, countries, mexico, people, age, years, marriage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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