The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map compares two potential sites for building a new school in
Canterbury
City
. The white area is housing and the green area is the countryside.
According to
the map, the first site, S1, is located in the northeast of the city
in the countryside and the other, S2, is located in the south of the city
centre. Although
the city
is small ,S2 has better accessibility for the Canterbury
's residents.
Considering the size of the city
, it is important to choose a site which has access to the neighbour's cities. S1 can be reached by a main road to Stury City
. Stury
Correct your spelling
Story
City
is a big city
in the northeast of Canterbury
with around 7000 individuals population which is only 4km far away from centre of the Canterbury
. Additionally
, S1 is closer to the university.
On the other hand
, although
S2 is close to housing areas, it is 7km far away from its closest neighbour, Chartham City
, which is a small city
with 4500 individuals. Also
, S2 is far away from the university.Submitted by rozakoohvand on
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