Some people believe that living in a big city has more advantages than living in a small town. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living in an urban city

contain

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many

out

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weights than being in a village some would agree with

this

. Personally, I totally agree with

this

for many factors, but the two main reasons are

,

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lot's

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lots

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of services the residents will fullfed with, and the

potentials

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potential

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that holds of making the individuals enhance the quality of their lives Actually,

their

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are many considerations about the advanced services provided to the people who are living in big

cities

,

such

as applying the advancements in medical care or even educational equipment.

Moreover

,

this

could help the residents get

the

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apply

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accurate diagnoses for their illnesses,

along with

best

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the best

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treatment they could ever have compared with

medical

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the medical

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cares

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care

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a small clinics

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small clinics

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would provide to them

at

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in

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towns.

Along with

that, the teaching methods at more advanced residential places

,

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apply

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will be more involved with technological ways, like it would be more attractive for students to help them understand the subjects well

with

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while

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keeping them motivated for

all

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apply

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the

year

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whole year

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.

For instance

,

smart

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a smart

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board

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boards

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in each class at

well developed

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well-developed

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schools in

the

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apply

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major

cities

, would contribute

in let

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to letting

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the students focus well or even

having

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have

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the desire of wanting to participate in class just

for

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to

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intereact

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interact

with the smart board.

In another

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reason why I believe growing up in large

cities

have

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so

much

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many

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positives

than

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over

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rural

cities

, is the ability to make our lives much easier

with

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by

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being around

variety

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a variety

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of fields,

could

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which could

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help the persons to find the appropriate path that suits their desires. That should be considered as a primary role in

defined

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defining

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the individual intrinsic, which will help them to be creative

at

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in

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their field more.

Also

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there are better various of transportation all around the city which will make the people to

moving

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around easily.

To conclude

, some individuals might think that living in huge

cities

would have many benefits for the

resident

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residents

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more than

who

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those who

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are living in

suburbs

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the suburbs

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. And I could not agree more with them, because of important services in the big

cities

which rural places don't provide for their residents.