The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map indicates a proposed plan for a new
city
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. The plan contains the housing
areas
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, the main and ring roads, the industrial
areas
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, bus stands, the parking sites, and the recreational places.
According to
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the map, the proposed
city
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will structured into and outside of a
circle
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which will be attached together by a ring road. Most of the recreational
areas
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, all the parking lines, one-third of housing
areas
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and all bus stands are in the
circle
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. The industrial
areas
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, one recreational area and two-thirds of the housing area will be located outside of the
circle
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. There are several housing
areas
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, most of which are in the west of the
city
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, and all of them have great access to the main roads. Three creational
areas
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are in the southwest near the parking line. Another one is under the others but outside of the
circle
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. The bus stands and parking lines will be attached to the other parts by four main roads.
Additionally
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, the industrial
areas
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are almost in the outside of the
city
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. One of them is in the southeast and the other is in the northwest.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, areas, circle with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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