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The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of.. their course 'very good.

The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of.. their course 'very good.
#results #survey #students #courses #university #aspects #course
The table compares the results of
survey
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 considering
of
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first-year taking different courses at a certain university.
Overall
,
while
 in Economics and Commerces the highest figure was Teaching
quality
,in Laws the highest figure was Resource (other).
To begin
 with,in Economics highest
index
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indexes
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 were Teaching
quality
 and Tutor support similar to 95% and 92%.The average index
were
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 among
Resources
 (print) and Resource (other) 59% and 62%.The smallest index was Pre-Course Information just 55%. In terms of
in
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Laws
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Laws,
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 the highest indicator
were
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 Tutor support and
Resources
 (other) riching approximately 80%.The average indicators were Pre-Course Information and
Resources
 (print)similar to 72% and 70%.The lowest indicator was in Teaching
quality
 about 67%.
And the
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last
 course was Commerce,
the
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and the
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 top
figure
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figures
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 were Pre-Course Information,Teaching
quality
 and Tutor support around 94%.The median images were
Resources
 (print) and
Resources
 (other) about 81% and 86%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words quality, resources with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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