The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.
The supplied line graph indicates how much was the Japanese people's income monthly, and
also
the costs of black and white and color
televisions over a thirty-year period.
A glance at the graph reveals that the rate of wages had an upward Change the spelling
colour
trend
in Japan. However
, the prices of black and white and color
Change the spelling
colour
TV
witnessed a downward trend
over the period.
In 1953, the share of salary for Japenese
people was just under 20,000 Correct your spelling
Japanese
of
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apply
Yen
. (which was the lowest payment for employees and workers over the period). For the next 20 years later, the amount of income increased slightly in Japan. Then
, the proportion of salary
for Japanese faced a dramatic rise in 1983.
The amount of price of Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
color
televisions was precisely 100,000 Change the spelling
colour
Yen
in the second half of 20th
century. (between 1953 and 1963). Correct article usage
the 20th
Next,
this
trend
declined sharply and reached roughly 50,000 Yen
in 1983. Additionally
, Japanese individuals spent approximately 110,000 Yen
for purchasing
a black and white Change preposition
to purchase
TV
in 1953. (which was the highest proportion of costs for buying TV
over the whole year). Following
this
, the price of black and white TV
plummeted from 1953 to nearly 1960 and contributed to 40,000 Yen
in 1960. At the end
of the trend
, it decreased gradually and hit the bottom at just around 20,000 Yen
in 1983.Submitted by TUTOO on
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