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The charts below give information about the amount and types of water in the world, and also tell the use of water in three areas in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the amount and types of water in the world, and also tell the use of water in three areas in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts indicate the total
water
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 and the variations of fresh
water
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 in the world. The bar chart describes the sectors of
water
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use
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 in three different countries. It is noted from the graphs that the world contains both saline
water
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 and fresh
water
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. Again, there are four types of fresh
water
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according to
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 the sources.
Water
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 is used in areas including, domestic
use
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, industry, and agriculture in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada. The rate of saline
water
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 is 97.50% which is larger in amount than fresh
water
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. In the case of pure
water
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, frozen
water
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 is higher in percentage than any other type
whereas
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 fresh renewable
water
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 is the lowest among all the existing fresh
water
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.
This
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 means the most usable source of fresh
water
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 is the smallest in amount. The bar chart shows that the most
use
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 of
water
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 is in agriculture and Saudi Arabia is the highest
use
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.
In contrast
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, Canada uses most of the
water
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 in industry and Egypt is the lowest user of
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 in
this
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 field.
Overall
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, there are so many variations in
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use
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 and when it comes to domestic
use
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, Canada again demonstrates as the top user of
water
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conversely
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 Saudi people
use
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 less
water
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 in the domestic section compared to the other countries.
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