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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 map illustrates the whole landscape of the town of Brandfield. The construction of a new shopping mall has been decided by the urban authorities, where
two
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 sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.
Overall
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, the
city
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 centre is located in the middle of the
city
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, where the railway goes from the southern part to the northern part dividing the whole
city
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 into
two
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 parts. The golf course and park are located in the western part of the
city
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, it is surrounded by the railway on the northern side, the road on the eastern side, and the river on the southern side. The
city
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 is in the heart of the
city
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, which is divided into
two
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 by the river. The planners have kept the housing state in the northern boundary, where the industrial
estate
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 is in the eastern area. Both industrial and housing estates can be accessed easily by
two
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 means of transport
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 as train and road vehicles. The new shopping centre has been proposed on
two
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 sites, one is near the industrial
estate
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 and another is close to the housing
estate
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.
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, the second proposal near the industrial
estate
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 is in the corner of the
city
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,
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 the first proposal is near the
city
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 centre and can easily be accessed by train, road, and river.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, city, estate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • city planners
  • proposed
  • shopping mall
  • the main features
  • comparisons
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • recommendation
  • site selection
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