69.The line chart below shows the percentage of popualtion aged under 5 years old and aged 65 years old or above in the world since 1950 with projection until 2040. The table below shows the projection of the percentage of population aged 65 and above in 2030 and 2040 in different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for 69.The line chart below shows the percentage of popualtion aged under 5 years old and aged 65 years old or above in the world since 1950 with projection until 2040. The table below shows the projection of the percentage of population aged 65 and above in 2030 and 2040 in different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The line chart provided depicts the variation of

population

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comprehended by people above 65 years old

among

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USA

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the USA

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Sweden

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and

Japan

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from 1950 to 2040, projecting the figures towards the foreseeable

period

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. At first glance,

it is clear that

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an upward trend is illustrated in either

countries

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country

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. There has been a variation in the country with the elderly

population

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throughout the years. The increase in

population

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over 65 years old is noticeable, surging from about 5%, 7% and 9% to over 26%, 25% and 24% in

Japan

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Sweden

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and

USA

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, respectively.

Japan

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sharply rose in

population

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towards the end of the

period

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, jumping from 10% in 2025 to 25% in 2035.

In contrast

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, the steady surge in

Sweden

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and

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USA

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the USA

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was not that pronounced. By the end of the

period

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USA

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the USA

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occupied the rank with the higher elder

population

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. Before 2000,

Sweden

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surpassed

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USA

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the USA

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. Meanwhile,

Japan

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overtook both of them towards the end of the

period

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, usa, sweden, japan, period with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

156 words

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