One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is in some countries
university
students
live at
home
with their family
while
they
study
,
although
in other countries
students
attend
university
in another
city
. It is undeniable that
students
live at
home
with their
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while
they
study
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university
has become an essential part of our
lifeFix the agreement mistake
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.
However
, there is no absolute
as some people find
students
attendWrong verb form
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university
in another
city
beneficial,
while
others consider
associated with
students
attendWrong verb form
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university
in another
city
negatively. Surely, there are both pros and cons to living away from
home
during
university
,
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believe
advantagesCorrect article usage
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outweigh
disadvantagesCorrect article usage
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.
One of the main positives of living away from
home
during
university
is that
studentFix the agreement mistake
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should be more
responsibilityReplace the word
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in their adult
life
,
also
heCorrect pronoun usage
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will learn to create
life
for
, without
parentsCorrect pronoun usage
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controllingReplace the word
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.
For instance
,
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studentFix the agreement mistake
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should know how healthful products
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, how to take care of
yourselfCorrect pronoun usage
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, and
is important to know how
cleanAdd the particle
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yourCorrect pronoun usage
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roomFix the agreement mistake
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. Another
advantagesReplace the adjective
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is that
studentCorrect article usage
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would not be spouilt and selfish
, thanks to adult
life
, he
understandChange the verb form
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that Correct word choice
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how difficult live in adult
life
becauseAdd a missing verb
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he
needChange the verb form
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always think about what will eat, what will learn,
howCorrect word choice
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will do
.
StudentFix the agreement mistake
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may have
jobFix the agreement mistake
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in order to have money for
activities with friends.
Moreover
,
studentFix the agreement mistake
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should learn how to find a common language correctly.
Turning to
otherCorrect article usage
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side of the argument,
students
liveWrong verb form
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at
home
with their family during
university
is
also
rightCorrect article usage
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choice, if
youCorrect pronoun usage
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have
strongAdd an article
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attachment to family because
yourCorrect pronoun usage
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will be nearby
withChange preposition
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youCorrect pronoun usage
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.
Having weighed everything mentioned
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, we can come to
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that everything depends on
personAdd an article
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. If
studentCorrect article usage
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wantChange the verb form
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to
study
in another
city
during
university
,
liveWrong verb form
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away from
home
is
greatAdd an article
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choice for him, but if
studentCorrect article usage
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preferCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to
lifeReplace the word
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with family, why not? Live at
home
with family and
studyWrong verb form
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in
hometownCorrect pronoun usage
their hometown
his hometown
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is not
extremelyAdd an article
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bad idea, it would be
also
idealAdd an article
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decision for him