Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language

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university
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

students
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

live at
home
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

with their family
while
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

they
study
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

,
although
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

in other countries
students
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

attend
university
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in another
city
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

. It is undeniable that
students
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

live at
home
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

with their
family
Fix the agreement mistake
families

It seems that family may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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while
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

they
study
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in
Change preposition
at

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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university
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

has become an essential part of our
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

life
Fix the agreement mistake
lives

It seems that life may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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.
However
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, there is no absolute
agreeement
Correct your spelling
agreement

If you don’t want agreeement to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

as some people find
students
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

attend
Wrong verb form
attending

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb attend. Consider changing it.

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university
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in another
city
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

beneficial,
while
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

others consider
everuthing
Correct your spelling
everything

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associated with
students
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

attend
Wrong verb form
attending

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb attend. Consider changing it.

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university
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in another
city
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

negatively. Surely, there are both pros and cons to living away from
home
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

during
university
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

,
bit
Correct your spelling
but

The word bit doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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i
Change the capitalization
I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

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believe
advantages
Correct article usage
the advantages

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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outweigh
disadvantages
Correct article usage
the disadvantages

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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. One of the main positives of living away from
home
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

during
university
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

is that
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
student
Fix the agreement mistake
students

It seems that student may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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should be more
responsibility
Replace the word
responsible

The word responsibility doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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in their adult
life
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

,
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

he
Correct pronoun usage
they

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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will learn to create
comforable
Correct your spelling
comfortable

If you don’t want comforable to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

life
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

for
yourseld
Correct your spelling
yourself

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, without
parents
Correct pronoun usage
their parents

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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Correct pronoun usage
controlling them
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Correct pronoun usage
controlling them

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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controlling
Replace the word
control
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.
For instance
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

,
Use synonyms
Add an article
the student
a student
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Use synonyms
Add an article
the student
a student

The noun phrase student seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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student
Fix the agreement mistake
students
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should know how healthful products
need
Verb problem
are

There may be a verb use issue here.

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, how to take care of
yourself
Correct pronoun usage
themselves

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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, and
it
Rephrase
how it

There may be an adverb issue here.

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is important to know how
clean
Add the particle
to clean

It appears that the verb clean should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.

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your
Correct pronoun usage
their

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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room
Fix the agreement mistake
rooms

It seems that room may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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. Another
advantages
Replace the adjective
advantage

The adjective another appears to be modifying the plural noun advantages. Consider replacing it with the adjective other.

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is that
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
student
Correct article usage
the student

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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would not be spouilt and selfish
becuase
Correct your spelling
because

If you don’t want becuase to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

, thanks to adult
life
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

, he
understand
Change the verb form
understands

It appears that the subject pronoun he and the verb understand are not in agreement. Consider changing the verb.

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that
Correct word choice
apply

It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.

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how difficult live in adult
life
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

because
Add a missing verb
is because

It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.

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he
need
Change the verb form
needs

It appears that the subject pronoun he and the verb need are not in agreement. Consider changing the verb.

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always think about what will eat, what will learn,
how
Correct word choice
and how

It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.

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will do
everithing
Correct your spelling
everything

If you don’t want everithing to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

.
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Use synonyms
Student
Fix the agreement mistake
Students

It seems that Student may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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may have
job
Fix the agreement mistake
jobs

It seems that job may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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in order to have money for
difirrent
Correct your spelling
different

If you don’t want difirrent to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

activities with friends.
Moreover
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

,
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
student
Fix the agreement mistake
students

It seems that student may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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should learn how to find a common language correctly. Turning to
other
Correct article usage
the other

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side of the argument,
students
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

live
Wrong verb form
living

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb live. Consider changing it.

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at
home
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

with their family during
university
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

is
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

right
Correct article usage
the right

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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choice, if
you
Correct pronoun usage
they

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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have
strong
Add an article
a strong

The noun phrase strong attachment seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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attachment to family because
your
Correct pronoun usage
their

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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familly
Correct your spelling
family

If you don’t want familly to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

will be nearby
with
Change preposition
apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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you
Correct pronoun usage
apply

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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. Having weighed everything mentioned
up
Change preposition
apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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, we can come to
conclusion
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the conclusion

The noun phrase conclusion seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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that everything depends on
person
Add an article
the person

The noun phrase person seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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. If
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student
Correct article usage
a student

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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want
Change the verb form
wants

The plural verb want does not appear to agree with the singular subject student. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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to
study
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in another
city
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

during
university
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

,
live
Wrong verb form
living

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb live. Consider changing it.

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away from
home
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

is
great
Add an article
a great

The noun phrase great choice seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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choice for him, but if
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Use synonyms
student
Correct article usage
a student

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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prefer
Correct subject-verb agreement
prefers

It seems that the verb prefer does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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to
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life
Replace the word
live

The word life doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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with family, why not? Live at
home
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

with family and
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study
Wrong verb form
studying

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb study. Consider changing it.

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in
hometown
Correct pronoun usage
their hometown
his hometown
her hometown

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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is not
extremely
Add an article
an extremely

The noun phrase extremely bad idea seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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bad idea, it would be
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

ideal
Add an article
an ideal

The noun phrase ideal decision seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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decision for him

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task achievement
Try to clearly state your position in the introduction and ensure that it is consistent throughout the essay. It would help provide a more comprehensive response to the essay topic.
task achievement
Develop your ideas more fully with relevant examples. Adding examples clarifies your points and enhances your arguments.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that your paragraphs have clear topic sentences and are logically connected to improve the overall coherence and cohesion of your essay.
coherence cohesion
Work on using linking words effectively to connect ideas within and between paragraphs for better flow of the essay.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. This helps in achieving a coherent response.
task achievement
You addressed both sides of the argument, which is good for a balanced discussion.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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