You recently spent the week on holiday at your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter; - Say what you like about your friend's new house - Say what you enjoyed most about your holiday - Suggest when and where you could meet next

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Dear Saman, I'm writing to say a big thank you for having me over

last

week, I had a really

time

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good time

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. Love your new home. The garden is

facinating

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fascinating

. Sitting in your garden was great because of the vivid flowers and the decorations. Since it's spacious you can host so many people at once. I loved the city tour we had. Your hometown is a great place to

raised

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raise

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a family. It's a vibrant place and full of required amenities. The dinner we

from

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had from

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that

chinese

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Chinese

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restautant

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restaurant

was the greatest I had so far. I tried to make that dish at home

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but failed to get the same taste and aroma. Let's meet soon.

May be

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Maybe

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you could come to my home for dinner? How about the first weekend

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of next

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month? let me know ASAP. Thanks again for

great

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a great

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holiday. looking forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Sangeeth

Submitted by dmsangeeth on Sun Nov 10 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure that every paragraph is focused on a single idea to enhance clarity.

Task Response

Carefully proofread to catch minor spelling and grammar errors, such as 'facinating' instead of 'fascinating', and 'restautant' instead of 'restaurant'.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your greeting and closing are warm and appropriate for the context of a letter to a friend.

Task Achievement

The letter covers all the points in the prompt: complimenting the house, sharing what you enjoyed about the holiday, and suggesting a future meeting.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

149 words

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You recently spent the week on holiday at your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter; - Say what you like about your friend's new house - Say what you enjoyed most about your holiday - Suggest when and where you could meet next

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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