The table below shows the kinds of second languages Korean students learned and the line graph describes how many Korean students went overseas to study between 1980 and 2005.
There are two figures that display
Korean
students
' behaviours.Firstly
,The table chart illustrates the proportion of languages which students
learned as a second language from 1980 to 2005.Secondly
,the line graph presents the number
of Korean
students
who went to study abroad between 1980 and 2000.
Overall
it can be seen that English was the most selected language in all the periods given and In that period,Korean
students
went overseas at an increasing rate in all countries.
To begin
with,All of the Korean
students
studied English as their second language but the second place was between Japanese and Chinese.That is
to say,The percentage of Chinese chosen gradually rose up from 5% to reach a peak at 26% in 2005 while
, the Japanese had a more fluctuating trend starting with 12% of students
and then
increased
exponentially to peak at 30% in 1990 but after that Wrong verb form
increasing
year
, the percentage levelled off to the same number
as the beginning.Additionally
,French and others had a small minority accounting for around 10% throughout those years.
Moving on to the line graph,In the first five-year
period,Only less than 40 thousand
students
went overseas.However
,after the year
1985,the number
of students
studying in America grew exponentially to 120 thousand
in 1995 and then
remained constant.Korean
students
also
went to China at a gradually increased rate from 20 to 50 thousand
in 2000.Japan became a more popular destination because the number
climbed up significantly after the year
1990 to reach a stagnant point in the year
1995.Finally
,others had some degree of level up in the same year
as Japan which was around 10 thousand
to 20 thousand
in the year
1995.Submitted by chawanat.pla on
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