You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The diagram shows three different planned sites for a new supermarket in the city of Ellington with a population of 120,000.
It is obvious that these sites are totally far away from each other.
While
A is in the residential area
, B and C
are in the countryside.
Located near the traffic-free zone, A is also
close to the industrial area
, with a railway passing under it. In addition
, C
shares the same features as A, it is adjacent to the other industrial zone, and the railway is also
situated close to the proposed site C
. Besides
, there is a park which is in the residential area
, next to C
. Moreover
, there is an airport which is adjacent to either A and C
.
On the other hand
, B is far from the industrial area
and the railway, even the airport. The only infrastructure near B is a motorway which is on the left side .Submitted by n6160978224716 on
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