The maps below show the centre of a small town called lslip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called lslip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the present buildings at the
centre
of the small town
Islip
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of Islip
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as well as
the future plans for its renovation.
Overall
, the future plan is all about adding more facilities to the town
centre
and expanding the main road to create a dual carriageway
while
new housings are expected to be found in the town
centre
of Islip.
Firstly
, a round dual carriageway will be built around the city
centre
which is expected to use the countryside.
Moreover
, there is a plan to change the
overall
structure of the shops located in the north of the map. A new bus station, a shopping
centre
, a car park and a new housing complex will be added there
whereas
the main road inside the area will be converted into a pedestrian road.
Also
, Housing in the south will be shifted to the southwest corner and a new residence will
be appeared
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beside the park
while
the park will be shrunk in size.
However
, shops on the south side, the school and the residential complex on the south are expected to be unchanged.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • centre
  • small town
  • current state
  • development plans
  • maps
  • features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
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