The below diagram show the generation of hydro-electirc power from water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relecant.

The below diagram show the generation of hydro-electirc power from water.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relecant.
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The given diagram demonstrates how electricity is produced by water.
Overall
, it is important that the number of stages that power passes is 9 and it starts from the sea and finishes at places that need energy.
According to
the graph, at the start, water
that is
in the sea is evaporated by obtaining energy from the sun and produces rainy clouds;
then
the clouds rain to the Reservoir, which is behind the damp and has 2 various sections
that is
the outlet and inlet. Later when the valve
that is
under the outlet opens, the turbine, under damp, rotates and generates power;
Thereafter
, the water that passe the Turbine is sent to the pump, the tool that can send liquid from one place to another region, to come back to the tank. The picture illustrates that the electricity
that is
produced by the turbine moves to the Transfer station, the area that has some gadgets to convert high voltage electricity to the voltage that the user needs, by High Voltage Cables after that, Underground Cables, send power to the Hospitals, Industries, homes, farmlands, and so on.
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