Student satisfaction-percentage of respondents rating aspect as 'very good' The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking varlous courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course 'very good'.

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The table provides the result of a survey of first-year applicants taking different courses at

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univercity

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university

. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course very good.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that the highest amount of Teaching quality

are

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Economic

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Economics

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and

commerce

while

the top

percentage

of other aspects is

commerce

. The highest score of Pre-course information is

commerce

at 95%. The middle

percentage

Law

at 72%,

while

the lowest level is

Economics

at 55%. Regarding

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Teaching quality the highest scores are the same for

Economics

and

Commerce

at 95%.

Law

is at 67%. In terms of those Tutor support the highest index

are

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similar to

Economics

and

Commerce

at 93%, and 92%, respectively. The lower level is

Law

at 79%. The highest score of Resources (print) is

Commerce

at 81%,

while

the lowest

percentage

Economics

at 59%. The average score is

Law

at 70%. In Resources (other), the highest level is

Commerce

at 86%.

Law

is at 80%, and the lowest

percentage

Economics

at 62%.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

177 words

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