Student satisfaction-percentage of respondents rating aspect as 'very good' The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking varlous courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course 'very good'.

Student satisfaction-percentage of respondents rating aspect as 'very good'

The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking varlous courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course 'very good'.
The table provides the result of a survey of first-year applicants taking different courses at
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univercity
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university
. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course very good.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the highest amount of Teaching quality
are
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is
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Economic
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and
commerce
,
while
the top
percentage
of other aspects is
commerce
. The highest score of Pre-course information is
commerce
at 95%. The middle
percentage
is
Law
at 72%,
while
the lowest level is
Economics
at 55%. Regarding
to
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Teaching quality the highest scores are the same for
Economics
and
Commerce
at 95%.
Law
is at 67%. In terms of those Tutor support the highest index
are
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similar to
Economics
and
Commerce
at 93%, and 92%, respectively. The lower level is
Law
at 79%. The highest score of Resources (print) is
Commerce
at 81%,
while
the lowest
percentage
is
Economics
at 59%. The average score is
Law
at 70%. In Resources (other), the highest level is
Commerce
at 86%.
Law
is at 80%, and the lowest
percentage
is
Economics
at 62%.
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