The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps below illustrate the planned future changes of the industrial area in the town of Norbiton.
To begin
, the roundabout in todays
Norbiton industrial area has only two exits Change noun form
today's
whereas
, the roundabout in the planned future development has 4 exits. In addition
, it is planned to build a bridge across the river. Moreover
, utilities such
as school
, medical Fix the agreement mistake
schools
centre
, shops, and Fix the agreement mistake
centres
playground
are planned to build. Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
Finally
, all the factories are replaced by housings
.
Fix the agreement mistake
housing
Firstly
, the roundabout remains in the same place. The roundabout is now surrounded by factories however
, it is planned to be surrounded by housings
, Fix the agreement mistake
housing
medical
centre, and shops. The playground and school are going to be Correct article usage
a medical
bulid
in the east.
Correct your spelling
built
To sum up
, main
changes are Correct article usage
the main
buliding
new utilities and Correct your spelling
building
housings
, making it more suitable for Fix the agreement mistake
housing
human
to live in.Fix the agreement mistake
humans
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