The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps below illustrate the planned future changes of the industrial area in the town of Norbiton.

To begin

, the roundabout in

todays

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Norbiton industrial area has only two exits

whereas

, the roundabout in the planned future development has 4 exits.

In addition

, it is planned to build a bridge across the river.

Moreover

, utilities

such

school

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schools

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, medical

centre

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centres

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, shops, and

playground

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playgrounds

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are planned to build.

Finally

, all the factories are replaced by

housings

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housing

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Firstly

, the roundabout remains in the same place. The roundabout is now surrounded by factories

however

, it is planned to be surrounded by

housings

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housing

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medical

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a medical

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centre, and shops. The playground and school are going to be

bulid

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built

in the east.

To sum up

main

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the main

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changes are

buliding

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building

new utilities and

housings

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housing

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, making it more suitable for

human

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humans

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to live in.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

135 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

What drives your interest in applying for the IISMA program

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast transport for cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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