Many people leave their home country and go to other countries to live and work.why do you think it is happening?do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantage.
It is true that many people tend to leave their mother countries, in search of green pastures and
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Ensure that your essay completely addresses both parts of the question: why people migrate and whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, in more detail.
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