The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph depicts the amount of

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or women in one particular year. The steepest slope can be seen in the

men

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's blue line, rising and falling quickly.

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’s changes in attendance are quite rapid, women’s are more stable and tend to rise slowly but surely. There were three times when both genders’ attendance averaged out, meaning that the gym was divided in half, and no one dominated the area.

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out of four durations, there were more

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than women in the gym and vice versa. Around 2005 the number of

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with gym

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reached 5000, which is the biggest amount from 1980 and 2010 in both male

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female categories. Women almost managed to reach 3000,

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they always stayed below. The steepest decline happened from around 2005 till around 2009

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when the

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of male memberships decreased significantly below 800. In both trends there are

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straight lines, indicating that the number was either rising or falling.