The table shows proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.
The given table represents the percentage of income of
adults
and children
spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.
Overall
, the highest share of food expenditure was made by women , and the second place is taken by adults
and then
the rest.
And the highest proportion of money
on electronic equipment was spent by children
because they liked new devices and the second place is taken by boys 18% and then
the rest. For music adults
, men and women spent the same 5% amount of money
, but others spent much more money
for example
: children
spent 39%, boys spent 38% and girls spent 40% proportion of their money
on music. And for videos adults
, men and women spent a little bit of money
but others spent more money
than these three, for example
, children
spent 12% of the money
, boys spent 18% of their money
and girls spent 17% of the money
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