The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years 1960 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below. The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years 1960 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
The given line chart demonstrates data about how many people that had various sexes per thousand smoked in Someland from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
, it was important that women's trend increased while
men's fashion reduced over the period of 40 years.
According to
the diagram, at the start, the figure of males, who smoked in Someland, hit 600; then
it declined slightly to just under 600 in 1970; thereafter
, it went down moderately to nearly 400 in 1990; thereafter
, it fell significantly to roughly 250 in 2000.
The graph shows that in contrast
to the men the number of females that smoking climbed owing to the fact that it reached approximately 100 in the beginning; then
it jumped to about 200 in 1965 after that, its figure was constant until 1970, after that, it leapt and touche the vertex at just upper 300 in 1975, and it stabilized between 1975 and 1978; however
, it fell marginally to 200 in 2000.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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