The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart illustrates the numbers of visitors at one social centre in Melbourne Australia for different activity groups between 2000 and 2020.
Overall
,
while
participants
for table tennis and musical shows steadily increased, the numbers for film club and martial arts fluctuated throughout the given period. Table tennis began at around 18 in 2000 and increased to 20 in 2005.
While
the
number
stayed the same until 2010, it almost tripled in 2020 to around 55.
Similarly
,
although
only started in 2005,
participants
for musical performances grew to 10 in 2010 and constantly rose to just under 20 in 2020.
Although
fluctuated, film club
participants
continued to be the highest. After decreasing slightly from around 65 in 2000 to 60 in 2010, the
number
went up to just around 68 in 2020.
Likewise
, in martial arts after declining to around 30 in 2005, the
number
went up to just under 40 in 2010.
However
, the
number
went down again in 2015 but grew slightly to just around 36 in 2020.
Conversely
,
although
increased slightly in 2005,
participants
in amateur dramatics plummeted from just under 30 in 2005 to around 6 in 2020.
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