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The table graph provides information on marriage trends in Australia over a 40- year period from 1960 to 2000.

The table graph provides information on marriage trends in Australia over a 40- year period from 1960 to 2000.
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Overall
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, religious
marriages
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 saw a decline ,
while
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 civil
marriages
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 experienced significant growth.
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,y, the ages of
brides
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 and
grooms
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 showed a steady increase throughout
this
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 period. In detail, the distinguishes between religious and civil
marriages
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. In 1960, there were 42,000 religious
marriages
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 and 8,000 civil
marriages
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. Over the next decade, both
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 of
marriages
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 increased to three and four respectively. In 1980, religious
marriages
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 experienced
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 trend during the year,
also
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 civil increased to 16,000 at that time.
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, by 1990 , religious
marriages
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 had decreased to 32,000 ,
whereas
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 civil
marriages
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 slightly increased to 36,000 ,
while
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 civil
marriages
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 reached their highest recorded level. Regarding the
age
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 of marriage, in 1960 , the average
age
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 for
brides
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 and
grooms
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 in Australia was 21 and 23 years, respectively. By 1970 , the average
age
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 for
brides
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 had risen to 23, and for
grooms
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, it was 25.
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 trend continued, with the average
ages
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age
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 increasing by roughly two years by 1980. In 19990, the average
age
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 of
brides
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 was 28,
while
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grooms
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 were 29. By the end of the period in 2000, the average
age
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 of
brides
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 was 31, marking a significant increase from previous years,
while
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grooom's
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groom's
grom's
 ages remained slightly higher.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words marriages, brides, grooms, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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