The table graph provides information on marriage trends in Australia over a 40- year period from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
, religious marriages
saw a decline ,while
civil marriages
experienced significant growth. Additional
,y, the ages of Change the word
Additionally
brides
and grooms
showed a steady increase throughout this
period.
In detail, the distinguishes between religious and civil marriages
. In 1960, there were 42,000 religious marriages
and 8,000 civil marriages
. Over the next decade, both group
of Change to a plural noun
groups
marriages
increased to three and four respectively. In 1980, religious marriages
experienced highest
trend during the year, Change the article
the highest
also
civil increased to 16,000 at that time. However
, by 1990 , religious marriages
had decreased to 32,000 , whereas
civil marriages
slightly increased to 36,000 , while
civil marriages
reached their highest recorded level.
Regarding the age
of marriage, in 1960 , the average age
for brides
and grooms
in Australia was 21 and 23 years, respectively. By 1970 , the average age
for brides
had risen to 23, and for grooms
, it was 25. This
trend continued, with the average ages
increasing by roughly two years by 1980. In 19990, the average Fix the agreement mistake
age
age
of brides
was 28, while
grooms
were 29. By the end of the period in 2000, the average age
of brides
was 31, marking a significant increase from previous years, while
grooom's
ages remained slightly higher.Correct your spelling
groom's
grom's
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