The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The given graph illustrates the
number
of average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions
per person in European Countries from 1967 to 2007. Generally, it is clear that
in 1967 the UK
had the highest amount of CO2 emissions
, while
Portugal was in
the lowest. Surprisingly, it turned out that Change preposition
apply
at the end
of the given period
Sweden and Portugal had the same Add a comma
period,
number
of CO2 emissions
, while
the UK
still being
the highest.
In 1967, the Verb problem
had
number
of CO2 emissions
per capita in the UK
stood at 11 metric tonnes
, higher than the other four countries. However
, there was a slight drop to 9 metric tonnes
at the end
of the period
. The number
of CO2 emissions
in Sweden followed an almost similar trend as in the UK
, started
at 8 metric Wrong verb form
starting
tonnes
, but in 1977 the number
of CO2 emissions
rose sharply to 11 metric tonnes
and continued to drop significantly to 5 metric tonnes
over the three decades.
In contrast
, Italy and Portugal showed a nearly rose pattern over the period
. Portugal began at the lowest number
(1 metric tonnes
) and increased dramatically until Change to a singular noun
tonne
reach
the same Wrong verb form
reached
number
as a
Sweden Correct article usage
apply
at the end
of the period
(5 metric tonnes
). Also
, for Italy
there was a sharp increase in the Add a comma
Italy,
number
which almost reach
two times higher than in the first Wrong verb form
reached
of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
period
(4 metric tonnes
to 8 metric tonnes
).Submitted by Agreita Salsabila
on
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