The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The given graph illustrates the
number
of average carbon dioxide (CO2) Use synonyms
emissions
per person in European Countries from 1967 to 2007. Generally, Use synonyms
it is clear that
in 1967 the Linking Words
UK
had the highest amount of CO2 Use synonyms
emissions
, Use synonyms
while
Portugal was Linking Words
in
the lowest. Surprisingly, it turned out that Change preposition
apply
at the end
of the given Linking Words
Use synonyms
period
Sweden and Portugal had the same Add a comma
period,
number
of CO2 Use synonyms
emissions
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
UK
still Use synonyms
being
the highest.
In 1967, the Verb problem
had
number
of CO2 Use synonyms
emissions
per capita in the Use synonyms
UK
stood at 11 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
, higher than the other four countries. Use synonyms
However
, there was a slight drop to 9 metric Linking Words
tonnes
Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
. The Use synonyms
number
of CO2 Use synonyms
emissions
in Sweden followed an almost similar trend as in the Use synonyms
UK
, Use synonyms
started
at 8 metric Wrong verb form
starting
tonnes
, but in 1977 the Use synonyms
number
of CO2 Use synonyms
emissions
rose sharply to 11 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
and continued to drop significantly to 5 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
over the three decades.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, Italy and Portugal showed a nearly rose pattern over the Linking Words
period
. Portugal began at the lowest Use synonyms
number
(1 metric Use synonyms
Use synonyms
tonnes
) and increased dramatically until Change to a singular noun
tonne
reach
the same Wrong verb form
reached
number
as Use synonyms
a
Sweden Correct article usage
apply
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
(5 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
). Use synonyms
Also
, for Linking Words
Italy
there was a sharp increase in the Add a comma
Italy,
number
which almost Use synonyms
reach
two times higher than in the first Wrong verb form
reached
of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
period
(4 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
to 8 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
).Use synonyms
Submitted by Agreita Salsabila
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, co, emissions, uk, period, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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