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Nowadays, technological progress has been drastically improved. Every day at least there are new upgraded technologies such as computers. As a device that has a function to manipulate information and data, computers become the most ingenuity device of the last hundred years. In fact, I agree with those who feel that computers have been the most creative creation of the last hundred years.
Many countries spend on space exploration to discover new technologies to help in different fields. while I concur that there are a few national issues which require more money to overcome, people are struggling with poverty, health issues and many more.
Many people think that schools should add working as a subject for children because they do not understand the world of work and how money is made. I disagree with this statement because of many reasons.
These days, technology has been developing immediately also, it allows us to use everything for instance, we can use so many vegetables and fruits that we do not have or are out of season by plane to our area, so for this happen we have two various views a group of people believe that this way is the best choice while other one thinks it is important that use air transport for other aims. In my opinion, the first idea is the best one owing to the fact that by this work international inhabitants can try everything without spending a lot of both money and time to provide these things that are good for their health.
It is undeniable that alternative medicine has become popular among the population due to the lack of physicians and the long waiting time for a medical appointment. However, from my perspective, the use of non-conventional medicine in preference to a traditional one is an alarming tendency with a plethora of undesirable outcomes.
