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The mortality rates in developing nations are higher than those in developed nations. This is due to the fact that in the upcoming economies, people are still dying from diseases that are curable and these people cannot afford to buy medicines. The drug companies should sell medicines at low cost to these countries by fast-tracking their research and development programs to manufacture medicines economically. Also, the government in these countries need to subsidize the medicines to make them affordable to poor people.
In recent years, an increasing number of people have become seriously overweight, which has raised concerns about public health worldwide. While some people believe that increasing the price of fattening foods could be an effective solution to this problem, others argue that this approach is unfair or ineffective. I partially agree that higher prices on unhealthy foods can help reduce obesity, although it should not be the only measure taken.
Recent decades have witnessed an ever-increasing number of people urging governments to support artists by providing pecuniary assistance, while others contend that government budgets should be allocated to citizens in need. In this essay, I will delve into both perspectives.
Whether to take the entrance fee to visit the museum has been a subject of debate. While some museums provide free entry, other national or international museums ask for an entry fee. I strongly believe that there are multiple benefits of taking charges from tourists to visit museums. As most of the artefacts are precious and old; they need to be preserved with care, even the administration needs funds to secure these treasures. Although there are some drawbacks to priced tickets, the advantages are more positive than the disadvantages.
