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Currently, people believe that any research using animals is not a good thing and should be banned while others may think that important inventions or scientific discoveries can result from animals. This essay will examine the justification for experiments on animals and another option to replace it.
People who are over 50 years old with various job experiences are having difficulty securing a good job in some countries. There are various reasons as to why this is and several impacts this could have on this age group of workers. This essay will list the causes and effects of this.
In many parts of the world, there is a growing focus on building houses, and these developments often come at the expense of a city’s natural habitat, such as parks and farmlands. While this can help address housing shortages and revitalize areas, the loss of green zones in cities can negatively affect the surroundings and people’s mental well-being. Therefore, it is a negative improvement overall.
Nowadays, there is an increasing number of advertisements in order to increase the companies' sales. In my view, this trend should be perceived as a negative trend. In this essay, I will propose some strategies to make valuable advertisements and some reasons for their bad influence.
There is no doubt that overeating may be causing various detrimental health issues, like smoking. Therefore, I agree with the statement that advertisements are the most powerful marketing tool for publicizing manufactured goods among customers. Some countries have imposed restrictions on product commercialization because advertisements may be harmful, like smoking. In the following paragraphs, I will provide arguments to support my opinion.
