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These days there are many processed foods that are of questionable nutritional value, possibly justifying bans. However, whether such foods are actually bad for people's health is up for debate, and they should therefore generally continue to be sold.
With the cutting edge technology nowadays. Most people are now tend to work remotly. As well as students will attend their classes without going to school. I strongly believe that is a positive approach to follow.
It is often argued that books for learning English play a better role than teachers. I strongly disagree with this sentence, because literature cannot contain all the content of English education, and also learning English from teachers can provide more effective ways. In this essay, I will discuss those two reasons why teachers are a better means of learning English than books with details.
Some argue that news is dangerous for audiences since it prefers to report issues rather than positive developments. I strongly disagree with this opinion because warning contents raise public awareness and netizens now have watched enough good information on different media platforms.
It is widely believed that since people who smoke regularly are aware of the consequent diseases, they have to be fined financially by paying more than non-smokers when they get sick. I strongly agree with this notion, and in the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on the reasons why I argue it has to be done.
