The chart below shows the milk export figures from three European countries between 2008 and 2012

The  chart below shows the milk export figures from three European countries between 2008 and 2012
The provided bar chart illustrates data on the figure of
milk
export from three different European countries from 2008 to 2012. From an
overall
perspective
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it can be clearly seen that
the
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milk
exports increased in Italy,Russia and Poland over the past 4 years,with Russia being the largest exporter. Looking into the details, in 2008,Italy exported 17
million
tonnes
of
milk
. There was no growth in 2009 either.
In addition
, by 2007 it had reached 20
million
tons.As for Poland, its
milk
export performance was the lowest compared to other countries. After that, in 2009 and 2010,
Poland
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exports decreased,
7
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and 5
million
tonnes
, respectively.Until 2012, it showed almost the same indicator, 14
million
tons. When it comes to Italy, it was dominant
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export
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than other countries. It was just
and
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25
million
tonnes
in 2008 and reached its peak of 40
million
tonnes
by 2010.
Nevertheless
,there has been a decline in the
last
2 years, reaching just under 30
million
in 2011 and 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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