The graph below shows th number of overseas visitors to three different areas in European country between 1987 and 2007
The provided line graph demonstrates information on how the count of overseas tourists to various places changed in a European country within 20 years.
From an
overall
perspective, it can be clearly seen that the number
of visitors
to three different places experienced a gradual increase in the given time frame.
To begin
with, although
the count of visitors
to the coast was dominant, it decreased by 1992, dropping from 40 to 35. Conversely
, the number
of travellers to the lakes moved reversal and overtook the count of visitors
in the mountains until 1997, raising
to 40. Correct your spelling
rising
Then
, it continued and reached a peak point in 2002, about 75. However
, it experienced a sharp decrease at the end
of the period, at 50. While
the number
of guests to the coast surged steadily and kept the leader at 75.
When it comes to the number
of visitors
to the mountain, there was a ceaseless growth during the years, even though it was outsider
by 2007, approximately 35.
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