The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides key information about the percentages of contents the Iceland society from 1990 to 2020.The comparison was by the age of each content.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graphs that the grey
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was always the highest one throughout the period.
In addition
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, it keeps increasing until it reaches around half
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.
Whereas
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the percentage of people between 15-24
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old decreased slightly.
According to
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what is shown, the
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1990 and 2000 witnessed a close of the rates of individuals above 65 and from 54 to 64.
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, the light blue
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was constant at quarter in these
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.
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the gray
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increased 3% the yellow one decreased the same rate. In terms of the
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2010 and 2020,The child and teenagers and mature people ,orange one, declined 3%,7% and 2% respectively. Unlike the
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category
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, was climbed sharply.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words category, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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