The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar chart illustrates the rate of
literacy
among both female and male genders in six various countries
in 2000.
overall
, it is clear that
, while
a significant number of people in south
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South
Asia
had the highest average of
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apply
literacy
, those who lived in developed countries
had the lowest rate of literacy
.
To begin
with, while
women who lived in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states, and South Asia
, were in the highest position in terms of literacy
rates
, those who lived in regions including, east Asia
, Latin America and also
developed countries
had the lowest rates
of literacy
, by 20, nearly 10 and approximately 2 percent
, respectively.
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per cent
On the other hand
, the male generation who lived in East Asia
, Latin America, and developed countries
had the lowest literacy
rates
, in contrast
, those who lived in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states, and South Asia
, were in the highest levels of literacy
rates
. Moreover
, in comparison, the overall
rates
of literacy
among female generations were significantly higher than male generations.Submitted by mahanz on
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