In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, studying in different regions is quite popular among

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students

in some countries,

while

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others prefer to stay and live at

home

with their

family

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families

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. I strongly agree that the

advantage

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advantages

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of living away from

home

during

university

outweigh the disadvantages.

Firstly

,

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living away from

home

could

shaped

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the

independency

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of the

students

. The

students

can manage their own personal and academic

life

and

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the

life

skill

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to

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themselve

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themselves

before entering the actual world. To illustrate, by giving them the freedom to live their own

life

,

students

can explore their

interest

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yet at the same time lead their own self to become more independent, mature and ready to face the actual world.

Secondly

, the pupils can maximise their social

life

with each other. By living away from

home

, the

students

didn't have to

wasted

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their time

to travel

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back and forth from

home

to

university

. They can

spending

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their time

in

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campus,

expoloring

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exploring

and joining the community, or doing some

project

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together. The experience will be different from the

students

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commute every day from

home

to campus.

Although

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living at

home

with family still

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positive side

such

as they can still close

with

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their family;

however

it is the process of being an adult that can

shaped

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them into

a mature individuals

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a mature individual

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in the future. So I believe that it is the best

choices

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to

living

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far from

home

during

university

. In conclusion, the benefits of living far away from

home

during

university

clearly outweigh the disadvantages. It gives the student

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prepared

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themselve

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themselves

before entering the professional world after college.