The table shows the changes in modes of travel in a European country between 1995 and 2025. It also shows a projection to the year 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows the changes in modes of travel in a European country between 1995 and 2025. It also shows a projection to the year 2015.
The given table illustrates how five different modes of transportation changed in European
country
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countries
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from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
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, there was a
suddent
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sudden
increase in
use
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the use
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of air and rail as a mode of
transportaion
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transportation
over the given period.
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, buses
seems
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seem
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to
loose
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have lost
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popularity
whereas
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,
bicycle
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bicycles
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and
motorbike
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motorbikes
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experienced a little fluctuation and showed very
less
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little
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change
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