The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides data about how many
years
uk
immigrants decided to stay over a period of 8 Correct your spelling
UK
years
. The pie chart shows why they immigrated to the country in 2008.
It is clear that
people who wanted to live up to 2 years
saw a significant increase in 2004. Also
, the main reason for migration was work, accounting for 38%.
Focusing on the first picture, non-british
residents who Change the capitalization
non-British
were
intended to live more than 2 Unnecessary verb
apply
years
remained at the same level during the whole timeframe. However
, only in the last
year, the group of 2 to 4 years
rose by around 50 thousands
in one year.
Moving on to the second picture, it can be seen that there are several reasons why people desire to stay Change to singular
thousand
such
as work, study, accompany/join family, and other
. Some of them didn't state their purpose Fix the agreement mistake
others
of
immigration. More than half of the population came to the country for employment (38%) or education(32%), amounting to 70% in total. Followed by those, the proportion of people joining their families was 16%.Change preposition
for
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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