The table and chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in four countries.

The table and chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in four countries.
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The table and chart show the breakdown of what students spend each week
while
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studying abroad in four countries.
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,
Country
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A is the most expensive for studying abroad,
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Country
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D is the cheapest. In all countries, living
expenses
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make up the largest portion of the costs. Looking at
country
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A,
it
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has the highest
cost
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of studying abroad.
This
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is $875. Half of
this
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figure is living
expenses
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.
Tuition
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is $358.
Accommodations
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expenses
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are $220.
Country
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B is cheaper than
country
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A. The largest part of
expenses
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is $350.
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, the
tuition
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fee is $320, and accommodation
expenses
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are $280. As for countries C and D, they are much cheaper. In
country
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C, the total
cost
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is $540. Living
expenses
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are $275.
Tuition
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is $250 and accommodation is $240.
Country
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D is the cheapest, with a total
cost
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of $435. The
cost
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of living in
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country
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is $225, the
tuition
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fee is $235, and the
cost
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of housing is $230. The main part of all these indicators is the
cost
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of living.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words country, expenses, cost, tuition with synonyms.
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