The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides data on the
coffee
and tea purchasing and drinking habits of people
in five Australian cities
: Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisbane
, Adelaide
, and Hobart
.
First,
Melbourne
was the cities
with the highest Fix the agreement mistake
city
percentage
of people
went
to a café in Correct pronoun usage
who went
last
4 weeks at 64%. Correct article usage
the last
Besides
, Hobart
had a slight difference in the number of people
who had visited a cafe at 63%. After that, Sydney
was the third with the large
Correct word choice
largest
percentage
at 61%. On the other hand
, Brisbane
and Adelaide
are cities
with lower café-going numbers, at 55% and 50% respectively.
Second,
the number of people
who buy instant
coffee
in Hobart
is the highest percentage
at 54%. Then
, Brisbane
was in second place for instant
coffee
buyers with 52%. After that, Adelaide
had a percentage
of 50%. After
this
, Melbourne
saw a slight difference in people
buying instant
coffee
at 48%, and Sydney
at just 46%.
Additionally
, purchasing fresh coffee
was the least popular choice in all cities
, with the highest figures seen in Sydney
and Melbourne
, where around 44% of residents bought fresh coffee
recently. Brisbane
, Adelaide
, and Hobart
had lower percentages with figures below 40%.
In summary, visiting cafés is the most favored
activity across these Change the spelling
favoured
cities
, with instant
coffee
being more popular than fresh coffee
, especially in cities
like Brisbane
and Hobart
.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, people, cities, sydney, melbourne, brisbane, adelaide, hobart, percentage, instant with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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