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The line graph below shows the percentage of people visiting GYM once in a month or more between 1984 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of people visiting GYM once in a month or more between 1984 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph outlines the ratio of individuals
in
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 different ages who did sports in the gymnasium once
in
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a month or more from 1984 to 2000. From an
overall
 perspective, it can be obviously seen that throughout 19 years, the percentage of sportspeople
in
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 all ages experienced progressive increases with the exception of
that
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for
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people
 in
the
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 middle age, which had a reverse tendency. It is
also
 evident that the highest point belonged to mature
people
who
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aged 18-25. With regards to the dominant figure, starting at around 14%, the proportion of 18-25 years old
people
 reached
the
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 peak in 2003, with approximately 65%, after rising gradually to 54% in 1999 by surpassing two other trends for adults and
middle aged
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people
.
While
 becoming the second highest in the chart, the percentage of 26-45 aged GYM members saw a mild rise from 30% to 40% between 1984 to 1989.
Then
, it fell down to almost its previous point and constantly grew to 52%
in
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 the end of the period.
Following
this
, the fractions for elders who are 65 and over increased moderately from merely 5% to 12% until 1994
,
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 and overtook 45-65 aged ones in 2003 with pretty much 20%. Turning to
declining
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 tendency, a marginal improvement was observed in the ratio of 45-65 years old
sport
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 lovers with 29%
initially
;
however
, it exhibited a sharp reduction to 10% by 2003.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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