Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To that extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,living in a foreign
country
has become very common and popular but some
people
that it causes many serious problems ,
also
practical problems.certainly agree with
this
view and in
this
essay, I will support my idea with some examples. On the one hand,first and foremost,many
people
to have a comfortable life decide to immigrate
to
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abroad,
hence
,they don't use their mother tongue and they start to learn a foreign language,
additionally
,speaking a new language , particularly for daily interactions,has never been challenging.it can create a miscommunication with native individuals and it would be hard to find a friend because they will avoid to a conversation if they don't understand it.
for instance
:in daily activities
such
as purchasing food when you ask for some item to be bought,the seller will hardly grasp and understand their orders.
consequently
:the sellers often become annoyed and enraged because they need to spend more time
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services to customers.
On the other hand
,in the contemporary, experiencing life in
foreign
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country
has more benefits than disadvantages because they not only try a new speech ,yo
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as a chance to visit a new culture,history and tradition.
For example
:the researchers study about a group of
people
who learn more than two languge addict to visit many historical places and get familiar with tradions in proportain a group of person who don't like to learn a foreign languge.
moreover
,the brains have understand faster than other peoples,
for example
:the students who go to another
country
to study at university or work at a company a higher intelligence rather than other
people
.
As a result
, sometimes living in countries with different cultures and speech has more cons than pros. In conclusion :
although
,living in a foreign
country
it has complication social and practical problems but you can mange these difficulties and enjoy our life with the best occupation and high education oppporunities .
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Ensure your essay presents a balanced view with supporting points for both sides of the argument. This will strengthen your task response score.
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Use more specific examples that clearly illustrate your points. Personal anecdotes or statistics can make arguments more relatable and persuasive.
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coherence cohesion
Consider using linking devices and transition phrases to improve flow between sentences and paragraphs. This will help improve coherence and cohesion.
coherence cohesion
Your conclusion effectively summarizes the main discussion points, providing closure to the essay.
task achievement
You've addressed both the social and practical problems as well as the benefits of living in a foreign country, indicating a balanced approach.
coherence cohesion
The introduction sets the context for the essay, noting an increasingly common reality of migration.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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