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table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22

table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22
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The chart illustrates
to
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information of rates Indian full-time
students
 in UK universities
in
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between 2020-2021, and from 2021 to 2022
datas
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data
dates
Overall
 the chart has 6 types of
university
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universities
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.
Furthermore
, the table includes Years, Changes Bar, and Increase Persanitages.
In addition
, the total
number
 of
students
don't
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changes
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 so much each
years
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year
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 In 2020/21,
the
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BPP
University
 has
biggest
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 student capacity
each
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 of the other universities. It has 3,505
students
in
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 contrast,
the
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Sheffield
University
 has
lowest
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number
 of
students
come
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who come
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 from
Indian
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India
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. The
number
 of
students
 is 15
in
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the
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Sheffield
University
. The
University
 of Leicester
follow
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to
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Sheffield
University
about
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total
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a total
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number
 of
students
.
Finally
, Anglia
University
in
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is in
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middle
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the middle
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 of the chart.
On the other hand
, all
universty
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university
 rates indiase to almost double in 2021/22.
Morever
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Moreover
, Coventry Diversity has
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higgest
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highest
biggest
number
 of
students
 in 2021/22.
Although
. The
Universty
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University
 of
Leicester
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Leicester's
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 rate is between
Sheffield
 and Anglle
Universitys
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University
 rates. The Change Bar is creasing from up to down of
table
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the table
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 The biggest change is Coventry
University
's data of Indian full-time
students
number
.
Also
,
paraplaves
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parables
 of growing over
the
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50
all
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university
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universities
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, just BPP
University
 under the 650 growing
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, university, number, sheffield with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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