The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in опе country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in опе country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.
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The line graph provides key information about the figures of shops that started and plugged into certain spaces from 2011 to 2018. The units are measured in thousands.
Overall
it is clear from the diagram that Increasing and decreasing both lines are parallel most of the time.
In addition
, 2015 witnessed a sharp climb in the number of closed stores,
whereas
the number of opening stores dropped clearly in 2012.
According to
what is shown, After harm falling the number of blocked markets returned to grow until reached 6000.
Then
it declined dramatically to 2000 shops.It is constant in the same amounts for two years.
Finally
, it decreased slightly to 3000 in 2018. In terms of the figure for opening shops,
Firstly
it started from 6400 in 2011.
Secondly
, stores were decreased softly by four hundred.
Thirdly
,the beginning market fluctuated for more than 4 years.
The following step is
that it almost fixed 5000 in the
last
3 years.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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