The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying or drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart depicts the data of a survey about people's
coffee
and tea
buying or drinking habits in five Australian cities
.
Overall
, it is clear from the illustration that most people like to go to a cafe to drink coffee
or tea
in all cities
.
Apart from Adelaide, when they want instead
instant coffee
or tea
, almost.
In the last
month, the highest consumption of coffee
or tea
was in cafés in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, with a percentage
over 61%.
Furthermore
, the lowest percentage
of consumed coffee
or tea
in cafés was in Adelaide at aroughly
48%.
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According to
what is shown, the percentage
of people who bought an
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coffee
was the second most favorable
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favourable
cities
, with a percentage
between 45% and 55%.
Meanwhile, the lowest hibit
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habit
percentage
of consumed coffee
was to buy a fresh one in all cities
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