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The charts give information about the diet and general health of two groups of students. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts give information about the diet and general health of two groups of students. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the nutrition of two
category
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categories
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 of
students
, and the table provides data on
the
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their
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 health condition
of
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apply
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them
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apply
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.
Overall
, it is evident that both
group
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groups
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 of
students
consume
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consumed
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 food with a
high fat
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high-fat
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contenct
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content
 and cereals
the
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apply
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mostly,
while
 the less eaten nourishment was fish and fruit in
two
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the two
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 groups.
Furthermore
, the percentage of the overweight and
illness
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ill
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 in the past year in
the
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apply
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group
 A was 2 times less as opposed to
group
B
,
although
 the attendance
rate
 at classes was higher
on
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in
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group
 A. Looking in more detail, the proportion of
the
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apply
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group
 A
students
 who eat fatty food and cereals accounted for 30% and 35%, respectively.
Likewise
, these types of
the
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apply
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nutrition
preferred
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are preferred
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 by
group
B
, with 50% and 35%.
Additionally
, the fruit intake
rate
 in
group
 A surpassed the other groups of
students
,
with
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by
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 3%.
However
,
the
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an
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equally
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equal
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 percentage of
students
 tend to consume
a
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apply
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fish, comprising
of
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apply
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5%.
Moroever
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However
, the
vegatables
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vegetable
consuming
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consumption
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rate
 was
significant
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significantly
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 higher in
group
 A compared to
group
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Group
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B
. Regarding the table, the ratio of overweight took up 10% of the total
students
 in
group
 A, though
this
 pattern for
group
B
 made up 20%. When it comes to the past
year
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year's
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ilness
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illness
rate
, the percentage of it in
group
B
 was 2 times higher rather than
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in group
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group
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Group
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 A.
In addition
, the participation
rate
 of the
group
 A
students
 constituted 90% of the total
students
,
while
this
 figure for
group
B
 was almost 75%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, group, b, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dietary patterns
  • nutritional intake
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fast food consumption
  • health indicators
  • diet quality
  • beverages
  • sugary drinks
  • health outcomes
  • obesity
  • physical activity
  • fatigue
  • health maintenance
  • anomalies
  • trends
  • balance
  • comparison
  • correlation
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