The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the amount of main fuels production in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
, the fuel of petroleum produce
higher Change the verb form
produces
energy
between the three. An energy
source of coal, on the other hand
, had fallen marginally. Interestingly, Starting with the lowest units than others, natural gas
shows a
progress after a decade Remove the article
apply
Correct word choice
and remain
remain
stable.
Looking in more detail, in 1981 Petroleum led the start points Change the verb form
remains
Change preposition
by aproximately
aproximately
90 Correct your spelling
approximately
energy
units compared to 80 energy
units for coal and 40 for natual
Correct your spelling
natural
gas
. Although
,
petroleum had Remove the comma
apply
fallen
in 1991 Replace the word
fell
with
producing around a hundred, its Change preposition
apply
remain
produced massive crude oil than two others.
Coal and Natural Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
gas
had similar range level
of results between 40 and 100. In 1981, Coal production Fix the agreement mistake
levels
higher
a half Add a missing verb
was higher
than
Correct word choice
that
natural
Change preposition
of natural
gas
for a total of 80 main fuels. However
, in the first five years its
Correct pronoun usage
it
plummet
Wrong verb form
plummeted
just
under 40 and Change preposition
to just
shows
a downward trend beginning in 1986 to 2000 after Wrong verb form
showed
increase
in two years. Natural Add an article
an increase
the increase
gas
, which overtook coal from 1991 to 2000 reaching
a peak of 100 in totals.Wrong verb form
reached
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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