The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the quantity of three main fuels produced in the UK throughout the years 1981-2000.
Overall
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, natural gas
production
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remained stable at first and later increased,
while
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coal
production
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tended to decline. Interestingly, there was a fluctuation in petroleum over the period;
however
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, it showed the highest each year compared to the other fuels. From 1981 to 1990, the
production
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volume of natural gas experienced relatively stable at approximately 40 energy units and became the
least
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lowest
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volume.
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, in 1991 it overtook coal
production
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before continuing to climb steadily, reaching 100 by 2000.
In contrast
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, the energy units of coal
production
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dropped from 60 to around 30, which recorded a downward tendency between 1986 and 2000.
On the other hand
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, petroleum
production
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soared in the initial period, reaching a peak of 140 energy units from 1984 until 1987, before dropping to 100. After remaining steady around 1991, it returned to growth at a modest rate, settling at 100 by the final year, which makes
this
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line the most significantly fluctuating
production
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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