Practice Questions: The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Practice Questions: The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provides information about the budget quantities of fortune used on books in
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four
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countries: Germany,
France
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, Italy and
Austria
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from 1995 and 2005. The money spent on the books in Germany experienced an upcoming trend over the
period
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.
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, Italy showed a downward trend over the
period
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except for a fluctuation.
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,
Austria
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and
France
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have reached the same rate
at the end
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of the
period
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. In 1995,the budget used for books in Germany was 80 per cent and
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it slightly declined until 2003,
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it reached its lowest point at about 85%.
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, the green line rose rapidly to around 95 rate in 2005. In 1995,
Austria
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, Italy and
France
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climbed around 30%,50% and 55% respectively. The blue and dark green grew gradually nearly 60% and 40% independently.
France
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continued with a gradual increase to 70% in 2001.
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Austria
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remained steady
about
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40% between 1999 and 2001. During 1997 and 2003, Italy illustrated an oscillation of about 55% and 60% respectively throughout the
period
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, exceeding Italy in 2003.
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, the yellow line continued to rise moderately almost 60% in 2005.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words france, austria, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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