The table below shows percentages of students with different attitudes for facilities in the university in the UK in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows percentages of students with different attitudes for facilities in the university in the UK in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given is the chart presents the proportions of undergraduate and postgraduate
students
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expressing different levels of
satisfaction
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with university facilities in the UK in 2008.
It is clear that
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the majority of
students
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, both undergraduate and postgraduate, were very satisfied with the
study
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facility
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.
In contrast
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,
satisfaction
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levels were lower for the social
facility
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and
cafeteria
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, with a higher
proportion
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of
students
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expressing dissatisfaction in these areas. Looking at undergraduate
students
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, 75% were very satisfied with the social
facility
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, which is similar to the
satisfaction
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level for the
study
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facility
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at 85%.
In contrast
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, only half of the
students
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were satisfied with the
cafeteria
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.
Additionally
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, 20% of
students
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were quite satisfied with the social
facility
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,
while
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5% were dissatisfied. For the
study
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facility
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, 8% were quite satisfied
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7% were dissatisfied, and for the
cafeteria
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, 35% were quite satisfied and 15% were dissatisfied. Turning to postgraduate
students
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, 65% were very satisfied with the social
facility
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, which was lower than the
proportion
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of postgraduates very satisfied with the
study
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facility
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, at 90%.
However
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,
satisfaction
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with the
cafeteria
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was lower, with only 40% expressing very satisfied. The
proportion
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of
students
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quite satisfied with the social
facility
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and
cafeteria
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was the same, at 25%,
whereas
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for the
study
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facility
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, it was 6%. A higher
proportion
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of postgraduate
students
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expressed dissatisfaction, with 10% dissatisfied with the social
facility
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, 4% with the
study
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facility
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, and 35% with the
cafeteria
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, satisfaction, study, facility, cafeteria, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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