The table below shows percentages of students with different attitudes for facilities in the university in the UK in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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Given is the chart presents the proportions of undergraduate and postgraduate
students
expressing different levels of satisfaction
with university facilities in the UK in 2008.
It is clear that
the majority of students
, both undergraduate and postgraduate, were very satisfied with the study
facility
. In contrast
, satisfaction
levels were lower for the social facility
and cafeteria
, with a higher proportion
of students
expressing dissatisfaction in these areas.
Looking at undergraduate students
, 75% were very satisfied with the social facility
, which is similar to the satisfaction
level for the study
facility
at 85%. In contrast
, only half of the students
were satisfied with the cafeteria
. Additionally
, 20% of students
were quite satisfied with the social facility
, while
5% were dissatisfied. For the study
facility
, 8% were quite satisfied and
7% were dissatisfied, and for the Correct word choice
apply
cafeteria
, 35% were quite satisfied and 15% were dissatisfied.
Turning to postgraduate students
, 65% were very satisfied with the social facility
, which was lower than the proportion
of postgraduates very satisfied with the study
facility
, at 90%. However
, satisfaction
with the cafeteria
was lower, with only 40% expressing very satisfied. The proportion
of students
quite satisfied with the social facility
and cafeteria
was the same, at 25%, whereas
for the study
facility
, it was 6%. A higher proportion
of postgraduate students
expressed dissatisfaction, with 10% dissatisfied with the social facility
, 4% with the study
facility
, and 35% with the cafeteria
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