The chart below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time in the year 1982. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below You should write atleast 150 words

The chart below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time in the year 1982. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below

You should write atleast 150 words
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The table presents the activities done by unemployed citizens of the UK in the year 1982. The columns stand for the time of day and gender
while
Linking Words
the rows list the activities.
Overall
Linking Words
, housework is the
activity
Use synonyms
more often done by females
while
Linking Words
males do job hunting more.
Moreover
Linking Words
, both genders have a preference to do these activities in the morning.
Conversely
Linking Words
, drinking is the least preferred
activity
Use synonyms
with figures only reaching at least 2-3%. For females, 49% do housework in the morning
while
Linking Words
21% do it in the afternoon.
Similarly
Linking Words
, 19% of males do their housework earlier in the day and only 7% do it later. For job hunting,
overall
Linking Words
, 34% of males do
this
Linking Words
activity
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
unemployed, with 22% doing it in the morning and the remaining 12% doing it in the afternoon. An
activity
Use synonyms
frequented by both genders is shopping and
overall
Linking Words
, 72% take part in the
activity
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by erickacasandra.abas on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words activity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: