The chart below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time in the year 1982. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below You should write atleast 150 words

The chart below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time in the year 1982. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below

You should write atleast 150 words
The table presents the activities done by unemployed citizens of the UK in the year 1982. The columns stand for the time of day and gender
while
the rows list the activities.
Overall
, housework is the
activity
more often done by females
while
males do job hunting more.
Moreover
, both genders have a preference to do these activities in the morning.
Conversely
, drinking is the least preferred
activity
with figures only reaching at least 2-3%. For females, 49% do housework in the morning
while
21% do it in the afternoon.
Similarly
, 19% of males do their housework earlier in the day and only 7% do it later. For job hunting,
overall
, 34% of males do
this
activity
while
unemployed, with 22% doing it in the morning and the remaining 12% doing it in the afternoon. An
activity
frequented by both genders is shopping and
overall
, 72% take part in the
activity
.
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