The charts give information about the diet and general health of two groups of students. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the
diet
information of two groups
of students
which are Group
A and Group
B
respectively whereas
a table shows the health information of those groups
.
Overall
, B
group
students
have negative health issues such
as being overweight, and ill in the past year, which are higher than A group
students
. Again attendance at class is 15% higher for group
A students
than in group
B
Firstly
, both groups
eat the same amount of fish and cereals and in the case of fruit group
A consumes 8% which is only 3% higher than the other group
. Moreover
,the group
A students
consume more vegetables in their regular diet
chart and differ by a noticeable amount which is 17%. Furthermore
, food with a high fat content is popular for both groups
but it remains 20% lower in Group
A regular diet
chart.
However
, the diet
chart affects students
' obesity, illness and attendance rate in classes and has significant negative consequences on group
B
students
. Again, Group
B
suffers from obesity which is twice times high as Group
A and 7% increasing illness than others. Also
, the attendance rate is 15 less for Group
B
students
than for Group
A.Submitted by priankajun on
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