The map below shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present.
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The provided map compares the
village
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of Rye
mouth
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Mouth
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from 1995 to
present
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the present
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From an
overall
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perspective, it can be clearly seen that there have been several changes in the map, but the most considerable alterations are the introduction of golf and tennis,
as well as
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elimination
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the elimination
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of
fishing
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the fishing
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port.
Additionally
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, minor changes along the roads As regards
to in
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1995, the farmland was situated in the northeast of the
village
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, and the forest park was located in the eastern of the
village
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.
However
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, the farmland and forest park are altered into golf and tennis at present.
Moreover
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,
the
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eight houses were located in the northwest of the
village
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in 1995,
whereas
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, there are a total of ten houses in the northwest of the
village
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.
Furthermore
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, the fishing port which
situated
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was situated
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from the south of the
village
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in 1995,
it
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has been demolished
as well
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as
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and
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the fish markets
are
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have been
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shifted into apartments at present.
Also
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, the five shops from the roadside are replaced with
a
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restaurants
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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